Post by AngelicKasai on Aug 9, 2008 15:59:27 GMT -5
Bits and pieces of my story for your viewing pleasure.
-Part of the second chapter-
Blood dripped from the wound on her neck and pattered onto her shirt as her heartbeat started slowing down. It was clear she was fading away and at any moment she’d leave this place. A bead of sweat trickled down the side of his masculine jaw as he struggled to lift her almost lifeless body out of the area. As he rushed frantically up the temple steps the stones crumbled under his feet. He was in every way determined to keep her alive even though he was completely helpless in doing so.
-Part of the third chapter-
There was a knock at the door and she pulled herself out of bed. She was wearing a button down shirt with snug slippers on her feet. The door hinges creaked as she pushed it open.
“Hello?” she said cautiously.
The wind chilled her face and chapped her lips as a man came around the corner of the house and replied to her.
“Do you want redemption..? Are you willing..?” he asked and these words chilled her even more than if she had stepped into snow and stood there stark naked.
He was barely a shadow but his presence was real and she grasped the edge of the door in fear.
“And who in the HELL are you?” she said grabbing a can of pepper spray.
“Your eyes burn with her passion…” he grinned and moved closer and closer with each word that was let loose from his lips.
“If you have second thoughts, come here.” The man wrote down a location onto the palm of her hand and drifted off.
-Part of the second chapter-
Blood dripped from the wound on her neck and pattered onto her shirt as her heartbeat started slowing down. It was clear she was fading away and at any moment she’d leave this place. A bead of sweat trickled down the side of his masculine jaw as he struggled to lift her almost lifeless body out of the area. As he rushed frantically up the temple steps the stones crumbled under his feet. He was in every way determined to keep her alive even though he was completely helpless in doing so.
-Part of the third chapter-
There was a knock at the door and she pulled herself out of bed. She was wearing a button down shirt with snug slippers on her feet. The door hinges creaked as she pushed it open.
“Hello?” she said cautiously.
The wind chilled her face and chapped her lips as a man came around the corner of the house and replied to her.
“Do you want redemption..? Are you willing..?” he asked and these words chilled her even more than if she had stepped into snow and stood there stark naked.
He was barely a shadow but his presence was real and she grasped the edge of the door in fear.
“And who in the HELL are you?” she said grabbing a can of pepper spray.
“Your eyes burn with her passion…” he grinned and moved closer and closer with each word that was let loose from his lips.
“If you have second thoughts, come here.” The man wrote down a location onto the palm of her hand and drifted off.